SW Chapter 24: Dangerous Warning Sign

Hello guys this is [R.E.A.D.E.R], and here is another quotes from our Savior Hikigaya Hachiman :
” Little sisters are strange indeed. No matter how cute they are, you just can’t feel anything for them. When I see her underwear, I just think, “Yep, that’s 100% cotton.” – Hikigaya Hachiman

That’s what real little sisters are like.

Sylver: Sorry about that, I thought May only had 30 days.


After equipping [Mind Saber], his physical attack reached 98 and his hit rate rose to 17.  This kind of damage and hit rate is abnormal among Apprentice Warriors at the same level. If people saw Ling Chen holding that sword, it would lead to a large group of players attacking him in a frenzy trying to rob him.

The other piece of equipment is a novice Assassin’s light leggings, Bronze level, but it’s no use to Ling Chen, he casted a glance and put it away. Afterwards he observes and wonders what the other things are.

[Poisonous pedipalp] : the pedipalp of the poisonous spider, can be used in forging, granting the forged weapon the “poison” attributes. (Sylver: Pedipalps)

There are eight Poisonous pedipalps. And the last thing, is what looks like a transparent bottle, inside there is a thick green liquid swaying slowly along his movement.

[Hell spider saliva]:  obtained from the poisonous spider, is extremely toxic, once contaminated, unless your power is above Fairy class, otherwise anyone getting infected will lose instantly 3o% of health. After leaving the hell spider body, the saliva toxicity will gradually dissipate, after 24h will lose all of it toxicity.

Ling Chen hand’s shook violently, almost throwing the bottle to the ground. But soon, he handles it carefully, the liquid inside the bottle is the poisonous spider saliva, Ling Chen feel fear in his heart. The liquid is dangerous but he also understand that it has a really amazing effect ,if he can use effectively and throw it at the body of any BOSS Fairy grade or below, he can take away 30% of their life.

Carefully put it away, Ling Chen subconsciously shook his hand, to prevent being contaminated. Then move towards the fifth area. The rear is completely sealed, he have to advance forwards.

Advancing to the rock gates, just one step from the fifth area, but suddenly, his whole body shock violently. ( [R.E.A.D.E.R]: Vi Britannia ORDER you: play this video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nL2lHvf75gA  )

Slowly, Ling Chen retracted his foot, and took a step back, he stared at the stone gate, and don’t move for a long time (Sylver: A common way to say a long time or to exaggerate time is half a day).

The reason is, as he was about to enter the stone gate, he feel an extreme sense of danger (TL: his spider’s sense is tingling…). That feeling is not a mistake, for many times in his life; this warning has saved his life many times, it has never failed him. This sense of danger tells him, right before him, there is a powerful enemy…so powerful that he is helpless in front of it! As soon as he entered, he will be easily crushed into pieces, without any mean to resist let alone fight it! (TL:yes he is about to meet his worst nightmare called EXAM!!!)

A second passed, after a full ten minutes, Ling Chen stood still. He tried to enter several times, but each time he makes a move, a terrible wave of danger surges, so he can’t move forward. What is inside; what is hidden in the cave? Could it be ten, and even more advanced lord Boss?

His sense of danger warns him to not enter, there is only a dead end (TL: ho? did you activate Ruo Ruo yandere route?), even if he had 10 lives he would still die. However, his retreat route is completely blocked, except advancing, he have no other options.

Half-hour passed, Ling Chen is still standing here. Behind the stone door, there is a deep darkness, perhaps once entered, he will fall and with the result is dying.(TL: yeeahh, after killing more than 2k of monster he died…from a pitfall……)

Time passed, and noon arrives. Ling Chen in the end did not advance, but took a few steps back and looked at the time, and then log out of the game.

He opened his eyes, he sees Shui Ruo attractive body, her beautiful eyes make the stars looks pale in comparison, seeing him opening his eyes, touching his cheeks with her hand pursed a smile, and sweetly said: “Brother.” (TL: [R.E.A.D.E.R] received critical damage, [R.E.A.D.E.R] has fainted).

Ling Chen stands up,Carrying Shui Fruo from the wheelchair, putting her on his knee, he scolded her: “I told you to not move around, what if you fall?”

“Hee, I will not fall. I want to observe brother. Brother looks while playing the game seriously, is very good looking.” Ling Shui Ruo takes advantage and use his arm to embrace her. In his arms, she gently twist her body, on the white smooth wrist she also wears a gaming device, she was waiting every day to get better, so she can enter the game with Ling Chen, secretly helping him to do some things.

Ever since that day she took the dose of the 13223 drug, Ling Shui Ruo’s smile became brighter and more beautiful, a day before she was desperate and have no hope with a dark future the promise with Ling Chen was the only reason why she could struggle for so long. For Ling Chen, in order to realize that wonderful dream, but the commitment has been out of reach, she is using her all to fight, but, she also knows herself she can’t struggle for long, thinking there is no future in, leaving Ling Chen living alone by himself, every day, her heart is in pain. But now God gave her a chance to be reborn, she believed in Ling Chen, believing the drug will save her, the depressing feeling disappeared, leaving a bright and pure sky in her heart. She knew after being reborn what to do, she will use all the time remaining in her life, to accompany the young man even in desperate times…… No matter what, even if the whole world hates him, and rejected him, she will not. (TL:Damn you onion ninja, DAMN YOU!!!)

Ling Chen put his arm around her waist and the other hand holding her light gaming device, he smiled and said: “In a few days when the body is completely better, I will take you along in the game world, I believe Ruo will like it a lot.”

“Mmm !! I am certain that day will arrive soon …… Yes, brother, do not forget this afternoon.” While leaning on his shoulder Shui Ruo, said softly. On  her cheek, a faint color red can be seen.

“Haha, of course, I will not forget.”

(TL: those with dirty though, I the great Reader order you, dance, jump, do squats AND commit suicide)

Ling Shui Ruo’s body is weak, her body can only a little of normal action for every day, although Ling Chen often takes her to feel the morning breeze and helping her to walking slowly, but the amount is not enough for the human body. To prevent Shui Ruo’s body from declining and become rigid, he needs to exercise the body and do some stretching and muscle massage, every seven days, he spends an afternoon time, he applies a strange massage technique that ordinary people do not know on every part of Shui Ruo body … Under his efforts, with Shui Ruo illness during three years, and spend the majority of her time in bed, but her skin is still white, like a baby, slim and delicate curve, every part of the body is perfect can’t find the slightest flaws.

Ling Chen often sweat a lot and collapse after every massage. Ling Shui Ruo although distressed, but she never try to stop him, but take the initiative to remind him every week. Because she does not want her body to becomes imperfect … … Only a perfect body, can match up with him.

In the afternoon,…

The warm sunlight passed through the light blue curtains, shining on the two snuggling bodies. Ling Chen placed Ling Shui Ruo on the soft bed, lying upwards, he extended his hand, one by one undoing the buttons in front of her chest and the belt at her waist. Slowly taking off the white dress. The hot summer season, Shui Ruo only wears a dress at home. Her slim legs and delicate arms like jade being exposed to the air after taking off the dress. Her entire body was only covered with pink underwear that barely covered her body, but was unable to hide her full, abundant, creamy jade-like breasts, An intoxiacting scene in sight.

Ling Shui Ruo’s flawless skin white and soft, smooth as jade. That is not the pale white of a sick person, but a milky white as if rubbed with a layer of cream. Slim, elegant legs especially seductive, her fine, smooth thighs white and soft almost to the point of being transparent, moving uniformly with her curvaceous, tight, soft narrow waist. Ling Chen’s hands lightly caressed her legs, almost uncontrollably wanting to extend his hand downwards, towards her exposed feet so soft as if they had no bones. (Sylver: Foot Fetish?) (Reader: nah, siscon)

Every inch of her skin had the charm to make people mesmerized, especially that pair of breasts that can just barely be grasped with a hand. So full, soft, smooth, perky, tightly pushing against the bra. 16 years old, is the age for growth, the bras that Ling Chen buys for her would always grow tighter after a period of time.

Need to buy new bras again for her, Ling Chen silently sighed with feeling, extending his hand and familiarly undoing the stopper at the back. A section of dazzling whiteness lightly popping out, the small, pink pearl at the tips also lightly bouncing with it, making Ling Chen dazed. Shui Ruo’s body, has always been the most beautiful scene he has seen in his life.

The bra slowly slid down her silky skin, that pair of soft breasts as smooth as jade like a pair of blossoming flower buds, shaking and trembling in a section of snow-white translucent skin. Her thin, soft and tender waist giving people the feeling of wanting to embrace her and gently take care of her. Her body soft and translucent like a jade carving presenting itself completely naked in front of Ling Chen, warm sunlight falling upon her body, painting an unimaginably beautiful scene…

“Brother, do I look good?” Ling Shui Ruo’s beautiful eyes slightly squinted. She did not cover her body, instead opening her arms, allowing Ling Chen to see even more clearly, she understands the enchantment of her body. That year the first time she revealed her body in front of him, she clearly remembers the always calm brother immediately went blank. and had a big nose bleed… That also became the biggest embarrassment of Ling Chen’s life. Ling Chen did not respond to her voice, his eyes like many times before becoming mesmerized. Shui Ruo smiled lightly, her pure and beautiful face appearing slightly flirtatious, she brought her lips close, sticking out her tongue, lightly licking the side of his ear.

Ling Chen’s entire body numbed, his body slightly shuddering. In his vision, is still Shui Ruo’s body beautiful to the point of perfection. Her perky, shaking breasts, thin, waist soft as if having no bones, her smooth, round butt, silky, flat stomach, elegant legs, paired with her even though young, but already unmatchable, beautiful face, along with her fae like aura of dreamlike purity. Truly no part of her body is not beautiful, every single part of her body enough to drive men crazy.

Ling Chen took a deep breath, difficulty closing his eyes: “Shui Ruo, don’t mess around, or else… I really will eat you.” (Sylver: I don’t think I need to explain what he means by eat. If not… he means sex)

“Hi (laugh), I’m not afraid, I’m brother’s in the first place… belonging only to brother forever.” Ling Shui Ruo not only didn’t back down, instead extending her arms wrapping around his neck, laughing beautifully.

Actually, every week at this time, is always the most painful moment for Ling Chen. His strong willpower withstanding the most difficult test. If Shui Ruo’s body was fine, he’d already taken her. But, her currently weak body cannot endure any sort of ravaging. Every time, he can only forcibly close his eyes, working hard to clear the dirty thoughts in his mind, and then using his hands, from top to bottom, from in front to behind, massage her entire body inch by inch…


’tis me. So [R.E.A.D.E.R] translated most of this chapter and I just translated that small bit at the end. I have to say, that was damn hard for me. The Chinese have like a million ways of describing one part of the body that sometimes doesn’t even translate to english. I can imagine that Chinese erotica pwn fifty shades of grey, though that’s probably not a good comparison. Another to add to the list of things I’m never going to translate, Chinese Erotica. Also, it probably doesn’t flow that well and grammar is probably really off. Can’t do much about that. Post suggestions in the comments.

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83 Responses to SW Chapter 24: Dangerous Warning Sign

  1. Annoyed reader says:

    Translator, can you please stop trying to be funny?
    You’re not.

    No offence, but when I read a story I want to get absorbed in reading it.
    I don’t want to be interrupted by you every sentence with some shit comment.

    Yes, I’m being harsh, but it’s beyond fucking annoying.
    Stop.

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  2. Seta says:

    Fucking incest parts are longer and more detailed than fighting scenes… I hate how light novels, manga and anime get ruined by harem, romance etc. I don’t care if there is some, but this is just sad. Will continue it though in hopes his sister dies or better yet she realize hmmm maybe the neighbor does have a big dick fuck my brother and end of incest. Yes, yes indeed that would be amazing wouldn’t it…

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  3. just a comment says:

    Well, you don’t need to worry about grammar in the erotic sections since I, for one, skipped the whole section. Because regardless of whether they’re related by blood or not, once adopted into the family, any sexual relations automatically become incest. That’s just a fact. No amount of excuses will change that.
    So, yea, the incest pretty much made this otherwise ok story into trash.

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    • just a comment says:

      And before you ask, no, I’m still going to read the rest of the story. Because, like I said, apart from the trashy bits, the story is pretty enjoyable.
      Also, the translator comments are hilarious. I actually laughed out loud at the DBZ reference during the termite killing a few chapters back ^^

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    • Faust Voncleave says:

      I can respect that. Personally i’m fine with incest, my only problem is with blood relation having kids because inbreeding can seriously mess up kids, which isn’t cool.

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  4. vernaxshin says:

    The love story is so sad gudamit, if anything happen to two of them im gunna curse the author to death.

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  5. chaosdichter says:

    my boner shall pirce the heavens and the force of my fapping split the lands
    (im sorry but how is a pervert (LIKE ME) supposed to not get aroused by this this is like like fuck i cant describe it…..)

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  6. K1nk4 says:

    Thanks for the chapter!

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  7. He has awesome willpower

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  8. Lee Hyun says:

    Well in my country, for sure the MC already arrested

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  9. cdlevit says:

    Well, I think that I’ll skip the ero part just because I can’t stop thinking of this fact: now she has 16 years.. and they knew each other for 3 years.. does she even understand what does ,,eat her up” means? I doubt so..

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    • cdlevit says:

      Sorry, I’ve forgot, thank you for translanting.

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    • Faust Voncleave says:

      I’m sorry, what are 16 year old girls like where you’re from? Cause were i’m from even the 12 year olds know that. Also she’s known him for 6 or so years, she’s only been sick for 3 years.

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  10. Will he survive? Will he take her once she’s cured? Find out next time on Dragon Ball Z.

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  11. kami says:

    Fucking annoying ass tl notes. Fuck you!

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  12. MysticJazzEnforcer says:

    Also, thank you Sylver as well.

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  13. MysticJazzEnforcer says:

    Thank you for the chapter Reader!

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  14. OhDine says:

    Your translator notes are starting to get real fucking annoying.

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  15. kenken says:

    I personally think they should change the way they refer each other as bro and sis…since they clearly doesn’t treat each other as sibling but more of a lover. They are not blood related anyway so it is fine.

    Btw I understand Ling chen’s torture he had to go thru when seeing and touching beauty Rou Ruo’s hot body but can’t eat…..only can hold back his desire which really deserve praises.

    Thanks for the chapter.

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    • Sean says:

      I think it’s normal in China for guys, that aren’t blood related, to be called “brother” by someone that they are close to. Once they get married, if they do, it’s very likely that Ruo will stop calling him brother and will instead use something such as beloved or husband.

      I’m not entirely sure, but I think they actually have multiple ways of saying brother that don’t mean exactly the same thing. She’s most likely calling him brother(one that isn’t blood related)? *shrug*

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  16. superkumaa says:

    ah, the word of the wise… I completely agree

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  17. TheFrostDude says:

    Thanks for chapter 24!

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  18. daike1234 says:

    Can you change Xia Wa’s name into Eve?, yknow , in chapter 40 thingy.

    Eve is what Google translate gave me, and it pretty much correct because of the story😀

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  19. ThunderSnow says:

    It’s just you “cough” I mean why would a bunch of ero lovers comment on a light novel with some ero stuff “we are only interested in ero! And the combat maybe😛

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  20. [R.E.A.D.E.R] says:

    it’s me or when there is some se scene there is more people?

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  21. sylver135 says:

    YES! I have done it! I have discovered how to use footnotes! You guys will probably still see TLs in the posts though. I will mostly use footnotes when I feel that there are too many TLs or when I feel like it’s better. I don’t know for sure though. We’ll see. This post will stay like this.

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    • iroha12 says:

      Stop doing TL notes at all. You ruin the story and you’re one of the worst translators i’ve ever seen. Keep the story as a story, we don’t care about what you think about it, keep it to yourself

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  22. Alderus says:

    Thanks for the chapter, but please, use tl notes in a hyperlink to the end of the chapter, the tl notes really jerkes you away from the story, it’s like watching a good movie and some random person keeps saying random things in your ears

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  23. Arthur says:

    Thanks no really THANK YOU for this chapter.

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  24. You order us! You dare to order us! Then I obey!!!!

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  25. ThunderSnow says:

    Damn that erotica flows like a waterfall if only there weren’t those damned TL notes I might have done something Thx xD can’t wait for the next chapter I like ur translating style so don’t even dream about removing the erotica the F5 army shall revolt ! I think the sex scene is in chapter 41 not sure maybe I’m wrong

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  26. Ainzcrown says:

    I LOVE this chapter!😉 But seriously, thanks for the chapter! Also just a side note, a little too many TL notes.

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  27. kirindas says:

    Thanks for the new chapter! I like the TL notes, the comments are entertaining.

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  28. Linked says:

    Great Chapter, but the TL Notes disrupt the flow from the story, it would be better to have a footnote for them or something, cause I’m reading it and then all of a sudden you guys pop up and then I get confused. By no means are they bad, they just disrupt the flow of the story. But good work, Hope that was positive criticism😀

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    • sylver135 says:

      Footnotes sounds like a good idea. I think I’ll try to implement that. I just want to do that thing where clicking on the number makes it scroll down to the bottom of the page which I have yet to figure out yet.

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  29. anon says:

    Thank you for the chapter but there are too many tl notes, hopefully you can add them to hyperlink instead.

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  30. Anonymous says:

    So they will have sex in the future right?

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  31. WTF says:

    All of these TL comments and shit are so annoying, stop adding them in they’re taking away from the story.

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    • sylver135 says:

      First of all, complaint section. Second of all, rude (although your username makes sense). Third of all, as long as the physical content of the story is not modified, the TL has the right to put whatever he wants in the post. Wait, this is illegal, we have no rights. But still, remember that people have feelings. “Stick and stones may break my bones but words will never hurt me” is absolute bullshit. So respect. And your comment has been noted.

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  32. anon says:

    May have indeed 31 days, but what does that have to do with it?
    we are still in april

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  33. Kakemonoko says:

    Are they related by blood ?

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  34. Vivec says:

    Thanks for the chapter. I don’t mind “taboo” relationships in stories, because I’m the kind of person who goes, “I don’t care what other people do as long as everyone involved is happy with it, and it doesn’t directly harm the freedom of the people surrounding them.” In fact, the taboo ones tend to have the most enjoyably happy characters when I’m reading, and with the current state of my mind I probably need to read more happy stories.

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    • sylver135 says:

      It’s not taboo. They aren’t blood related at all and since a while ago they’ve never really thought of themselves as brother and sister.

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    • Abnormality says:

      How is it even a taboo relationship?

      They’re not blood-related.😀

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      • sylver135 says:

        Because them peoples be skippin’ past dat prologue! Tsk Tsk.

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        • Vivec says:

          I didn’t skip the prologue! I just read so many stories that I get things mixed up when I’m sleepy! Here’s a pastebin of what I’m currently keeping up with. http://pastebin.com/hFWen2Bs

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          • sylver135 says:

            holy crap. you might be reading more books right now than I’ve read in my life. Possible hyperbole, not sure. And you read a lot of fan fiction.

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            • Vivec says:

              They’re surprisingly decent reads. They usually have one or two really good things that make the story with reading even if it has glaring weaknesses, and some I just read for existing and allowing me to practice reading story patterns. It’s inevitable for me to get a thing or two mixed up, but my memory will improve anyways.

              I forgot to mention that I started this list last winter break, so you can only imagine the reading density I’ve pulled off. The completed/dropped stuff would somewhere around double the reading volume this list indicates.

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              • sylver135 says:

                Cool, you must be a god at predicting future events in stories then.

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                • Vivec says:

                  You’d be surprised how unpredictable the authors are. Sure, you can easily predict the general outline of what’s happening, but predicting specific events, the causes, or figuring out the limits of magic systems that the author hasn’t even explained yet is rather difficult. I’ve certainly had quite a few times where I’ve had spot on guesses, and I even once bothered to comment it and have to put a spoiler tag on the comment after the author of the fiction told me that I guessed too accurately, but it’s probably around 25% accuracy at best.

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                  • sylver135 says:

                    That is still really cool. Especially the part where you had to put a spoiler tag for your guess. If that happened to me I’d be like “Oh yeah, the name’s Holmes, Sherlock Holmes.”

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                    • Vivec says:

                      It’s something I’d expect anyone to be able to do if they’ve been reading as much as I have. I only spend upwards of 8 hours a day reading, as well as having spent most of pre-K through eight grade reading, slowing down to a book every couple months as I entered high-school followed by a random resurgence last winter break to that 8+ hours a day of voracious, semi-indiscriminate reading. Also, if you want a story with an end I didn’t see coming enough to want to bang my head into the wall read Oreimo. It’s worth it if you focus on the relationships between characters more than the otaku culture stuff going on, as the development and interactions between characters are the focus while the actions/topics are simply methods to force the interactions into the required situations. All I can say without spoiling is that I knew that Kyousuke was that pathetic, but I still expected more from him than to let it go that easily.

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                    • sylver135 says:

                      Based on the word pathetic and having better expectations from him. I’m assuming he is a character that does a lot of things that make you want to shoot him and in the very end you wish you could nuke him. If that is the case I will pass. I don’t doubt that it is a good book, but if that is the character of the MC then I don’t think I could get too far into it.

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                  • Her Royal Highness Tasear says:

                    You done decent work keep it up then maybe you will reach my level. A few thousands books is only the beginning of the journey to be an immortal. (yep I said that)

                    ~ The World and Milky way Number one Reader
                    😉

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          • Isekai says:

            holy hell, and i though i read a lot, with 60 active and 2 more chrome windows with around 70 each on hold, your list stil have more with 300+, mine have just around 200, but since i’m not reading for much time and there is sometimes a stop for gaming marathons even including the completed/dropped maybe i wouldn’t have more then 300 on my list, you sir have my respect(or how some chinese novel would have it: you deserve a good bit of face haha).

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      • Vivec says:

        Because I’m too sleepy to remember the important details.

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        • dezzter96 says:

          Ah Royalroad, I read a lot less from now then I used to, but then again I used to actually do PR work for the RRL team and several fic authors over there… But then again Reading > Proofreading unless I’m in my G-Nazi mode.

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  35. RyuGen says:

    Thanks for the update Sylver. I certainly liked this chapter very much fufufufufu🙂.

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